More People Are Traveling Today Than Ever Before
Today world is more connected than ever before due to latest development in communication technology. This has opened the tourists to explore new and desired place, additionally more people move to foreign nation to purse higher education and jobs. Merits of traveler for travelling brings excitement to see the places they were dream about, furthermore to earn money and lead a better life.
Firstly, some people like to travel around the world during vacation times, specifically celebrities in sports and cinema prefer to spend in their leisure time in aboard for privacy and liberty. Additionally, many software professionals travel to different countries to meet their client and some stay and work for them. Furthermore, film shootings and sportsman travels to foreign nations for creating movies and to play their matches. Also, young students travel to study master’s degree in foreign nations because of best scholarship offered by universities.
Secondly, several people visit to different countries leaving their homeland for short time for work and vacation. However, there are people like to move and settle in developed nations for permanent jobs, offer better education for children, also to live a good and prosperous life. Advantages of movement is to avoid civil war in their homeland, to overcome the lack of unemployment, also many developed nations offer decent and good salary than from their own nations. To prove that, Standford University had done many surveys on Canada permanent residence entries and the results show that 80% people around the global like to move because of the Canadian education, less unemployment rate and less tax slab system.
To close, due to internal issues in home nations and more advantages in foreign countries made people to travel often compare to old days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
... is more connected than ever before due to latest development in communication technology...
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Line 1, column 330, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'dreamed', 'dreamt'.
Suggestion: dreamed; dreamt
... excitement to see the places they were dream about, furthermore to earn money and le...
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Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...pos;s degree in foreign nations because of best scholarship offered by universities. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72327608569 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0489284085 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.25 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265008499835 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967839525831 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938394406149 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175429075832 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108439844114 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.