Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council in you letter
• give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
• explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the locality
• describe the possible effects on the local people is the centre closes
Write at least 150 words
Do no write any addresses
Begin your letter with
Dear Sir/Madam,
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with reference to the news article in Hindustan Times dated 24th September stating that your department is deciding to close the sports and leisure centre in our society. I would like to express my views on the necessity of having the sports centre and benefits it provides to the people of our community.
I along with my family and friends spend most of our time after office hours in the leisure centre. We utilise our quality time paying plethora indoor and outdoor sports, for instance table tennis, cricket, badminton and so on. After all it not only relieves us from the daily stress but also helps us to keep physically and mentally fit and healthy.
The sports and leisure centre is of utmost importance for each member and every member to our society because of its formation it has brought innumerable benefit for the older as well as for the younger generation. Many of the Senior citizens can be seen jogging during the morning and evening hours, moreover, they have formed a jogger’s group. The young children and teenagers have regular fitness activities 7 days a week by the centre’s children fitness section followed by yoga session for younger ones and parents
If particular this centre is closed, it will have a tremendously negative impact on the residents. Without any physical exercise and activities, the society will face severe health issues such as obesity, cardiovascular diseases, and diabetic problems. Furthermore, Children will spend most of their time playing video games and watching television which will affect their eyesight and cognitive development. Conditional sentences
I hope you will take my views into consideration and make a decision that will benefit the people of our society.
Yours sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...vides to the people of our community. I along with my family and friends spend ...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ought innumerable benefit for the older as well as for the younger generation. Man...
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Line 7, column 530, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oga session for younger ones and parents If particular this centre is closed, it ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tive development. Conditional sentences I hope you will take my views into consi...
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y. Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, after all, as for, for instance, such as, as well as, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 5.05154639175 356% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 937.175257732 163% => OK
No of words: 295.0 206.0 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19322033898 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70777233636 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 127.690721649 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640677966102 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 290.88556701 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.353227002 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 4.34317383033 228% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136806966241 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483686835141 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528091897431 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694160672175 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648889379465 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 8.37731958763 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 41.2886597938 216% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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