You live in a rented accommodation which was recently damaged due to the bad weather.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter:
- explain what caused the damage
- why do you need them to fix the problem right away?
- what needs to be done to fix it?
Dear Mr Pattinson,
I am writing this letter to inform you that the bad weather condition had been detrimental to the house where I am staying as a tenant along with my family for the last one year.
last night; the heavy rains and fierce storms has broken many windows of my house. Moreover, the broken tree branches have not only wrecked the main entrance door of the house completely, but also have damaged the furniture, walls and flooring by entering through the shattered windows.
The freezing winds and rains are entering through the smashed windows thus making it unbearable to stay. Furthermore, the main front door is jammed, the furniture is broken and the plaster of the walls is falling off because of the broken branches, as a result, it is impossible to open the door and move out of the house. So I would request you get them fixed immediately as it is intolerable to stay with the cold winds especially for my five year old son
I would request you to kindly arrange a carpenter for repairing the damages caused to windows, furniture and the main door of the house, Additionally, please send the painter also to repair the damaged walls.
I hope you will understand the seriousness of the situation and will take immediate actions. Please do let me know if you need my assistance in any way?
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-22 | Pavani Parupudi | 84 | view |
| 2019-12-01 | Prabhp | 78 | view |
| 2019-12-01 | Prabhp | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-01 | Prabhp | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-18 | Saira Faiz | 73 | view |
- You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:•explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months•say how 87
- You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter, » explain why you were at the restaurant » describe the problems » 73
- You live in a flat and you have a tenancy agreement which states that you must give three months' notice when you wish to leave. You have paid a deposit of two months' rent. Now a member of your family has a problem and you need to give up your 73
- Your new neighbours have recently invited you to a party they are holding next Saturday. However, you have other plans on Saturday evening and cannot attend the party.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter:•thank them for the invitation•men 73
- Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...ith my family for the last one year. last night; the heavy rains and fierce storm...
^^^^
Line 7, column 458, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inds especially for my five year old son I would request you to kindly arrange a ...
^^^^
Line 15, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76229508197 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56983553746 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602459016393 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.0326785901 44.8134815571 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.2 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158965280849 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549274191057 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484464667008 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796526783322 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367694007583 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.