write about the following topic:
Some people think that parent should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?
Write at least 250 words
Leaning is a never ending process and is not solely restricted to younger people. However, it is an undeniable factor that most of our learning developed at the early age. There is one group of people assert that children should learn basic manners from their parents, whereas other group of people if of the view that school is the appropriate place to learn this. In my point of view both places hold equal importance, however, school is the place where children spend most of their time so major responsibility lies at their end. Let’s discuss both school of thoughts in detail before reaching to a final verdict.
To begin one, School is the place where children capabilities are rightly judged. Their capacity of observing and adopting good manner are identified in true manner since, they spend quite good amount of their day at school. Teachers and mentors are highly responsible to make kids learn good manners. For example, kids learn how to interact with other people, their school mates. Teachers should develop basic manners in children like sharing their meals, their accessories with other kids. School is not the place for academic learning but also a place where children basic grooming is done.
On the flip side, the importance of parent’s contribution towards developing good manners in their child cannot be overlooked. Being parents, they are as accountable as teachers are for this core responsibility. To make a child a responsible, mature and groomed, parents and teachers should be closely coordinating. In order to identify lacking and development areas, parents should be in close interaction with teachers. It is very vital to keep a close eye on kid’s development and basic grooming as if it is neglected at early age it will have severe consequences in future.
To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, it is the vital and mutual responsibility of teachers and parents for well-being of their children. Grooming in rightful manner and good upbringing will give a society a good human being in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13432835821 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83101871482 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513432835821 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9931456417 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5555555556 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235325608205 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803518314997 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419561083779 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150934499284 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446250554332 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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