Some people think that public libraries are not necessary today. Buy some feel that they r still providing some useful services. Discuss both the issues and give your opinion.
There was a time when the only source of getting information was public libraries, but time changed and now one can easily get required information through internet. There is a group of people who think that public libraries are no more required whereas other group are of the view that still believe that it should remain intact because of their contribution. We will discuss both stances and will try to highlight the importance of both.
To begin with, we must acknowledge the role of technology for bringing ease in our lives. Now when everything is available on internet, people think that role of public libraries are getting limited day by day. I myself has experienced the same ease in recent past when I had to submit one of my assignment and rather going to library for gathering information, I got every information with valid references by clicking on my laptop. By doing this I saved my time of visiting library as well as the money that was supposed to be consumed over taking library membership :D.
On the contrary, there are people who still believe in the importance of public libraries as it provides you the required ambiance to focus while studying/exploring the required information. One of my colleague is fond of studying and he never prefers handsets/laptops over library as he think that it provides required focus needed for studying. In addition to this, he feels good surrounded by people instead of staying at home in isolation.
To conclude this discussion, though everything is available on internet, yet we cannot overlook the importance of public libraries. It is responsibility of governments to resume and maintain the culture to promote public libraries as it plays a vital role in developing the habit of studying in youngsters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...whereas other group are of the view that still believe that it should remain inta...
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Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...re getting limited day by day. I myself has experienced the same ease in recent pas...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...ers handsets/laptops over library as he think that it provides required focus needed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, still, well, whereas, while, in addition, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98648648649 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98165195093 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533783783784 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4711749963 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153491246891 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589422891939 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380923841713 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926618404943 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298555432998 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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