Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to acknowledge you about the one of the member of our society, his name is Mr. Rajan, actually an activist, he has an abundant contribution in maintaining the cleanliness, protecting the environmemt and keeping the masses aware regarding environmental problems. Many people of our community believe that he should be honoured with an award for his work.
Mr. Rajan has made tremendous efforts to make this society tidy. Firstly, a couple of months ago, he requested the authorities to install dustbins everywhere, so that problem of trash can be easily solved. Morever, he equiped two types of bins, one collects wet waste and other dry waste. Secondly, on the March 8, at environment day, under his assistance , public planted approximately 30 trees in our community , which is such a great initiative to protect environment. Lastly, a couple of days ago, a seminar was organised in the society's campus where people gathered and being educated regarding environmented problems and how to tackle with them.
Considering all this, I feel he should be honoured for the work and efforts he had put to keep our society clean and pollution free. It is my humble request that he should be awarded with the" Most active person" of the whole society, as nobody is capable of doing work like him.
I hope you will consider it.
Yours sincerely,
Nancy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01724137931 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86169111909 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681034482759 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9614952481 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.818181818 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140254303505 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537545884298 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597276251118 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810378714099 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734323517073 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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