Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
Dear Sir,
This is with reference to your initiative for offering a award for people who are helping community and in true sense, living a social and responsible life.
i would like to nominate one of my friend, Mr. Kanwaljeet Singh. He is a true hero and an inspiration of others to come forward and help the needy. He is a doctor by profession and runs an independent clinic. Though is a professional and dedicated towards all his patients, but, he rendered free services for the poor and needy people coming from surrounding areas. In addition, he schedules a free medical camp every sunday.
Since, he is well known in surrounding for his social services, he receives 80% of his petients from underprivileged section. I recommed some monetary award for him and a full page article in Sunday special edition to recognise services and help as well as compensate him financially.
Yours' faithfully
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ference to your initiative for offering a award for people who are helping commun...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...iving a social and responsible life. i would like to nominate one of my friend...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...iving a social and responsible life. i would like to nominate one of my friend...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... runs an independent clinic. Though is a professional and dedicated towards all h...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, in addition, as well as, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91095284802 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662337662338 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7041771479 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7777777778 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 4.34317383033 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185850425991 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719131465635 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714341706908 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139039287763 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879355950613 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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