Your neighbor keeps his/her animal in the garden. Write to him/her about it and the inconvenience it causes you and your family.
In your letter
tell what the problem is
explain why it causes inconvenience
suggest a possible solution to it
Say what actions you might take if the need arises.
Dear Martin,
I am your neighbor from the 47th apartment. I am writing about your dog that was held on a leash in the garden.
The problem is my windows go directly to this place where you keep your dog and it brought about some difficulties for my family. For instance, your dog grubs out recently planted flowers. I have been watering and caring for these flowerbeds, but your dog has ruined everything. Furthermore, your dog is a real nuisance by barking. It really gets on my nerves and distracts us from remoted work.
I do not want to make a fuss but the noise and misbehavior of your dog bother my family and caused the uncomfortable condition to live in my own apartment.
I would recommend you walk more with your dog and ask for help from an educated professional. As long as I have a dog too, I can share with you the contacts of a marvelous trainer who has been making wonders with pets. A well-trained dog is not only will obey its master but also will behave properly in any place.
If you do nothing with misbehaving of your dog, I would complain to the animal save the organization. Under the law, you could not keep your dog outside without proper protection.
I hope you will take advice and will walk with your dog more often to eradicate destroying property.
Best wishes,
Elena Pr.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: WAS_BEEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'was' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: was; has been
...tment. I am writing about your dog that was been held on a leash in the garden. The pr...
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Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...icate destroying property. Best wishes, Elena Pr.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, really, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51046025105 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60751043331 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594142259414 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7056909761 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8666666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204905687702 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822515190256 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529303928531 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126728704644 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510988846879 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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