Dear Mr. Tom,
I am writing this letter in response to your complaint letter yesterday regarding the noise disturbance my flat had caused.
First and foremost, I sincerely apologize and humbly ask for your forgiveness.
It so happens that yesterday I got a surprise visit of one of my very old colleague way back elementary grade. James my friend and her wife Jane went to our city for their son's first chemotherapy, and deeply asked me if they can stay at my flat for the night. Since it is very late and I can feel that they are in the struggle to save money, my heart just cannot resist it and I let them in. They had traveled unexpectedly because the hospital gave the schedule of the medicine 6am this morning and informed them late yesterday midnight.
The whole night was excruciating for all of my family members, we were not able to sleep due to the fact that my friend's son John is crying with pain, because of his stage 4 brain cancer.
Today, they already had left to start the two days treatment. I also had booked them a transient home near the hospital so that they can have their privacy.
I hope you will forgive me for any problem it had caused, and I assure you that this will not happen again.
Sincerely,
Joebet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39215686275 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32394304252 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642156862745 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.5848597566 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5555555556 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165805458628 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635401164956 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853857369124 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106094951803 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978536144323 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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