Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter•Explain reasons for the noise•Apologize•Describe what action you will take

Essay topics:

Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter
• Explain reasons for the noise
• Apologize
• Describe what action you will take

Dear Olu,
How are you and the family? I received your letter last week in regards to your noise complaint that is originated from my house.

Semaya, my daughter is currently enrolled in a dancing competition taken place October . Her rehearsal center building was affected by the weather disaster that happened in August and for this reason it was shutdown. However, due to the time line for the competition and no location for her and team mates to practice. I volunteered my home for as a rehearsal center twice a week ( Monday and Friday) which will end in the last day of October.

I apologies for any inconvenience this may have caused you and your family. As I understand it may have disrupted your activities.

I will ensure that a noise proof wall is installed within two weeks to reduce the noise impact .In addition, we will ask the team to keep a lower tone of voice and music .

Please feel free to contact me if these measures are not sufficient to reduce the loud voices .

Yours Sincerly

Adebukola

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ly? I received your letter last week in regards to your noise complaint that is originat...
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...ek in regards to your noise complaint that is originated from my house. Se...
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...se. Semaya, my daughter is currently enrolled in a dancing competition taken ...
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... dancing competition taken place October . Her rehearsal center building was affe...
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...ken place October . Her rehearsal center building was affected by the weather d...
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...sal center building was affected by the weather disaster that happened in August...
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...e for as a rehearsal center twice a week Monday and Friday which will end in the ...
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...n two weeks to reduce the noise impact .In addition, we will ask the team to keep ...
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...e team to keep a lower tone of voice and music . Please feel free to contact...
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...not sufficient to reduce the loud voices . Yours Sincerly Adebukola
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... sufficient to reduce the loud voices . Yours Sincerly Adebukola
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...ce the loud voices . Yours Sincerly Adebukola
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74301675978 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59057048313 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648044692737 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9623790025 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1818181818 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 2.54639175258 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306928886886 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11304552087 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105459352098 0.0603063233224 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155147628364 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135046034906 0.0580467560999 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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