Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter•Explain reasons for the noise•Apologize•Describe what action you will take

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Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter
• Explain reasons for the noise
• Apologize
• Describe what action you will take

Dear Sir,

recently you have given me a written complaint regarding the noise from my house flat. I apologised for the
same but I can explain you the reason for the same. I have recently shifted here and also so many guests have arrived at my place. Although they all were celebrating my birthday too along with house party.

I assure you that this will not happened again please accept my apology for it.I told each and everyone that they should not make noise in the area where we live because it is a peaceful colony and everyone live peacefully with their family members.

this was the first and the last time which I have done and I have taken a strict action regarding it.Now all the things have done and noone will do anything regarding it. However, I told them that no one will not do any noise after twelve. And all are agree with me for the same.

Yours faithfully

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, recently you have given me a written com...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from my house flat. I apologised for the same but I can explain you the reason fo...
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Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o many guests have arrived at my place. Although they all were celebrating my birthday t...
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Line 4, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my birthday too along with house party. I assure you that this will not happened...
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Line 6, column 33, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...y. I assure you that this will not happened again please accept my apology for it.I...
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Line 6, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...d again please accept my apology for it.I told each and everyone that they should...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...acefully with their family members. this was the first and the last time which I...
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Line 8, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Now
...have taken a strict action regarding it.Now all the things have done and noone will...
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Line 8, column 253, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... do any noise after twelve. And all are agree with me for the same. Yours faithfu...
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Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th me for the same. Yours faithfully
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 26.3917525773 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51234567901 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13152536843 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1848380897 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.375 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258458364968 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10978161194 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819444555698 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143682514326 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732960668359 0.0580467560999 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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