Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter•Explain reasons for the noise•Apologize•Describe what action you will take

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Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter
• Explain reasons for the noise
• Apologize
• Describe what action you will take

Dear Mark,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I have received a letter from your side in reference to the noise coming from my apartment. Let me explain the situation.

To elucidate, I have recently moved into this new apartment as I purchased it from the previous owner and found out that there is a water leakage issue in the washroom which was not fixed. The leakage from the water pipe is making the bedroom walls damp and thus needed an immediate repair thus I took permission from the resident's welfare association for carrying such work. I can understand the noise coming from my flat is irritating and disturbing kids while sleeping and studying hence would like to apologize. To reduce the noise from tomorrow onwards I would instruct the labour not to carry major repair jobs which create additional noise after 6 pm.

I look forward to your cooperation and look forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely
Ben

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, so, thus, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77575757576 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45595918883 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648484848485 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4700879268 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5555555556 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316386033271 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13006631305 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879401139506 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210987557939 0.12726935374 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117696531289 0.0580467560999 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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