Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologize
describe what action you will take
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Jones,
I received your letter this morning about the inconvenience you faced due to the disturbance caused by me. I feel ashamed that how much you both suffered the last weekend. Actually, I and my roommate has joined musical classes, therefore, a tutor comes at home for teaching to us. As we are quite busy in the working days and we do not have enough time for attending the classes. So, we decided to do it on weekends.
Kindly accept our sincere apology for disturbing you. We were not aware that the music sound reached your apartment, even we closed all the windows and doors properly for soundproof. You are older neighbors and we do not want to lose our friendship because of this mistake. Please forgive us for this kind of action.
We promised you that you will not suffer again. We will attend the classes at the institutes rather than at your apartment, as we already informed our teacher. I hope you will understand the concern and forgive us.
I am looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Shain
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: FELLOW_CLASSMATE[1]
Message: Use simply 'classmates'.
Suggestion: classmates
...organized a special dinner party for my fellow classmates to my apartment. I am sorry for not inv...
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Line 5, column 395, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[2]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'to dinner'.
Suggestion: to dinner
...esult, I did not get time to invite you to the dinner because I was totally occupied with han...
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Line 7, column 471, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('calmly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('environment') instead of another adjective.
... and to ensure you that I will maintain a calmly environment in our society. In the future, I wil...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ise to the secretary of our society. I am looking forward to receiving a respo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, so, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 289.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59861591696 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63869815187 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515570934256 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2501687154 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1764705882 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94117647059 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258475390432 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742037767266 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661394912311 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127675406808 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870235279754 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.