Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot join him. Another friend of yours is willing to go.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
-explain why you go anymore
-say who can go instead of you
-say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Ankita,
I hope you are doing well. However, I wanted to inform you that I’ll not be able to join you for a movie because I’ve to go out of town to attend a business conference.
I understand after reading this, you’ll be sad and angry at me because I said yes to you that I’ll join you for a movie on coming Saturday, but this conference is necessary for my company because I’m going to present our services and they selected me to go on this conference. This kind of opportunity comes rarely, so I had to give priority to the business conference instead of going with you to this movie. I’m sorry but you know work comes first and this is the only chance to get my promotion.
Besides, you can go along with my friend who is also my roommate. Her name is Angelina, and she didn’t had any plans for the weekend. I could ask her to come along with you for a movie night if you will be comfortable, and after that, you can go out for a couple of drinks since you both like to hang out in clubs and bars along with the music. Angelina is just like you, you will feel happy to meet her.
I hope you will understand my situation of canceling the movie night, but after coming back I’ll take you out for a dinner at your favorite Italian restaurant.
Looking forward to meeting you on my return.
Regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'didn't' requires base form of this verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...e. Her name is Angelina, and she didn’t had any plans for the weekend. I could ask ...
^^^
Line 13, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng you on my return. Regards, Shwatank
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, so, well, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36111111111 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34540595107 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.3017540743 44.8134815571 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9090909091 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383047913768 0.216113520407 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147396555258 0.0766984524023 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724531824271 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215228040141 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647860691466 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.