Your neighbour has recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
• Explain the reason for the noise
• Apologise
• Describe what action you will take
Write at least 150 words
You do not need to write any addresses
Begin your letter as follows
Dear ………………………,
Dear Mr and Mrs Smith,
I am writing this letter in response to your complaint concerning the loud noise from my flat because of which you had to suffer.
Last Sunday, I was trying to repair a broken window in my kitchen. As some children were playing cricket outside my house, accidently, their cricket ball hit my kitchen window and not only broke its glass but also the wooden frame. Moreover, since, I do not have any prior experience of how to repair a window, the hammering must have created a problem for you and your family.
I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience caused because of the lack of my knowledge. It was cold outside so I could not do the repairing in my lawn. Although, I was aware that there will be noise but I did not now that it will be so loud that it will reach to your flat and cause inconvenience for you and your family.
As far as the work of the kitchen window is concerned it is still pending, I have decided to hire a professional. I will instruct him to keep the noise as low as possible. The work will be completed in a day or two.
Once again, I apologise for the problems faced by you. Please accept the box of chocolates as a token of my deepest regard for the disturbance faced by you due to my negligence.
Yours sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38429752066 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56914820618 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557851239669 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9637906598 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6153846154 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24869836702 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857352426483 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922627190288 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117020739056 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989719795272 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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