Your neighbour has recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
• Explain the reason for the noise
• Apologise
• Describe what action you will take
Write at least 150 words
You do not need to write any addresses
Begin your letter as follows
Dear ………………………,
Dear Mr and Mrs Smith,
I am writing this letter in response to your complaint concerning the loud noise from my flat because of which you had to suffer.
Last Sunday, I was trying to repair a broken window in my kitchen. As some children were playing cricket outside my house, accidently, their cricket ball hit my kitchen window and not only broke its glass but also the wooden frame. Moreover, since, I do not have any prior experience of how to repair a window, the hammering must have created a problem for you and your family.
I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience caused because of my rather amateurish carpentry skills. Since it was cold outside, I decided to complete the repairing work within the house rather that the lawn outside and I am regretful of my decision.
As far as the work of the kitchen window is concerned it is still pending and I have decided to hire a professional to complete the unfinished task. The work would be completed in a day or two and I will surely instruct him to keep the noise minimal so as to cause no further discomfort to my neighbours.
Once again, I apologise for the problems faced by you. Please accept the box of chocolates as a token of my deepest regard for the disturbance faced by you due to my negligence.
Regards,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 251, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... instruct him to keep the noise minimal so as to cause no further discomfort to my neigh...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6452991453 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65099217557 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.6515729817 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8181818182 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156556383395 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578336989933 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774805766445 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855802512715 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09922355344 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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