Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houselflat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter,
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Dear Mr. John,
This letter has been written in context to your grievance about the loud sounds from my residential place.
I think you had forgotten that I have informed you about the my college youth festival in which me and me other friends going to do a traditional dance. For practice session, my home is selected by the trainer because this scene is comfortable for the other participants.
I understand it is hard for you to sleep at night as our dance training lasts for 11 pm. Pardon me for the inconvenience caused by me. It will be a great help if you can adjust and allow us for a few days because there is no other option with us and only three days are left for the performance.
It is my guarantee this will never happen again and from next time we will definitely choose the region which is far away from the residential locality so that the colony people will not get disturbed.
Hope you will forgive me this time.
Yours Sincerely,
Johns Parker
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 58, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...orgotten that I have informed you about the my college youth festival in which me and ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50072605882 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661016949153 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6355034136 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7777777778 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244547516304 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100090389562 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057230216111 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12328054 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587331654791 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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