Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat Write a letter to your neighbours In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 wor

Dear Rick,

I am writing to apologise for your compliant about the unbearable noise from my house which caused inconvenience last evening.

I am sincerely sorry about the disturbance. I am aware how bad you felt when the noise extremely spoiled your evening and family time at home.

The reason for the noise was due to renovation work carried out last evening at my residence. The plumbing work was supposed to complete before 5pm yesterday, however it was delayed due to unexpected power cut. Unfortunately, the workers need to stay late hours and complete the task for the day.

I totally understand how the extreme noise caused unpleasant situation, therefore, I have asked the construction company to avoid any late hours of working. The entire work is expected to complete in two days of time. Until the time I will ensure the work is done only during the daytime hours and complete before 5pm daily, so that you won’t be disturbed again.

Thanks for the understanding on this matter.

Yours sincerely,

Sandeep

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... sincerely sorry about the disturbance. I am aware how bad you felt when the nois...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0523255814 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71826419775 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5660400859 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22549461345 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812871023263 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804545308788 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118337595027 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087511223226 0.0580467560999 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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