Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter:
– Your reason for writing
– What you would like to happen
– A nice, respectful style
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am accommodating next to your apartment. I wish to lodge a complaint about your pet which barks all nights. Unfortunately, it wouldn’t let me to sleep well and I am speculating to request you to make a decision about that.
let me explain you in detail. I am working from 6 a.m. to 8 p.m. and when I get home I totally need to rest well. Sadly, your beautiful dog, Tidy doesn’t let me sleep as he makes noise frequently from day to night.
Furthermore, I was wondering to ask you considering my situation and look for a good decision to make. I was thinking about any illness may he tackling with it, as his behavior is similar to my brothers dog while he has some issue with plants in his apartment.
To conclude, I could understand how this dog is important for you but I hope you understand the troubles that he brings to me and I would greatly appreciate your troubleshooting in this issue.
your faithfully,
Chi Chung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...m accommodating next to your apartment. I wish to lodge a complaint about your pe...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
...you to make a decision about that. let me explain you in detail. I am working ...
^^^
Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
... troubleshooting in this issue. your faithfully, Chi Chung
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62637362637 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9296639407 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7765253844 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5454545455 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247633684793 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973390934194 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645524990863 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136862019212 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059916859331 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.