Your recently did a home renovation. Write a letter to your friend and suggest to use your tradesman if he/she needs one. In your letter:
– Tell your friend about the renovation I
– Recommend your tradesman B
– Explain why this is a good idea. B
Dear Shruti,
Hope you are doing good. It's been a year since we met and we should catch up soon. Do you remember I discussed with you about getting my house renovated ? Well my place is completely redesigned. The kitchen has been transformed to a modular one and we have converted our bedroom to a master bedroom. I wrote to you to suggest the same tradesman that I had hired for my home.
I heard about him through my neighbors. She had recently done some changes in her living room. I found the furniture unit designed at her place really impressive and beautiful. That is the reason I gave him the contract for the renovation of my place. He works with extreme precision and detail. Even the minute parts of his designs and carpentry are perfect. As you are also planning to alter the room layouts and the design of your house, I think you should hire this tradesman as I can give a guarantee for his work. Since he uses good quality and authentic material, I can assure you that you will not regret signing him for the house work.
I hope you will consider my suggestion. Let me know if you need the contact details of the tradesman.
With Love,
Khyati
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, then, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49295774648 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43111490444 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629107981221 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1027350779 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.2941176471 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5294117647 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41176470588 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116096402898 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317462359731 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370994700834 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732110279234 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029084261449 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.87 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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