Some people prefer cold weather condition, while others don't. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Atmospheric climate and the different weather conditions greatly affect the lives of human beings. Certain people prefer and enjoy the winter season as it makes daily travel to places enjoyable as well as helps to keep the skin and body healthy whereas, some dislike the cold weather as it tends to make them lazy due to cold and uncomfortable because of additional layer of clothing.
In the cold season, the days are shorter than the nights and there is less humidity. As the temperature is low and less sunny, people enjoy leaving their homes and traveling to their work or other places. In addition, the perspiration of the body is less in winters due to less humidity. Thus, the body does not sweat and dehydrate much in winters which in turn keeps their body and skin health good.
However, the cold weather also has disadvantages in terms of active lifestyle and comfort level. To illustrate, cold weather makes people lazy and thus, people are not much energetic when they start their day and do any routine task. Moreover, in winter season, people have to wear multiple layers of clothing in order to protect themselves from the cold. Thus, the fur coats and hand gloves makes one uncomfortable to do any task as people are used to keep their hands free.
To summarize, there is a disagreement among people in their view about the cold weather. Although many dislike the winter season as it tends to reduce their energy level and make them uncomfortable due to extra clothing, In my opinion, the cold climate is more preferable as it makes the day to day life enjoyable and also helps to improve the health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...beings. Certain people prefer and enjoy the winter season as it makes daily travel to places enjo...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun dislike seems to be countable; consider using: 'many dislikes'.
Suggestion: many dislikes
...r view about the cold weather. Although many dislike the winter season as it tends to reduce...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...the cold weather. Although many dislike the winter season as it tends to reduce their energy leve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77304964539 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46279084895 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507092198582 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7746092231 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.166666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17876271926 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735745034436 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568024995139 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118126443282 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413236069039 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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