Your sister has asked you to organize the music for her wedding at the end of next month. Write a letter to your friend who is an amateur musician. In your letter
● ask your friend to perform at the wedding
● describe why he/she would be suitable for this event
● explain how your friend will be compensated if they agree.
Dear Annie
I’m just writing to let you know that I’ll be managing the music for my sisters’ marriage, which has been fixed for 20th April, 2021.
I’m delighted that my elder sister has chosen me to arrange an artist for her special occasion. As you’ve recently started your career as a dancer, I believe its a golden opportunity for you to showcase you artistic talent to our guests. Moreover, my father has invited myriad professionals around the city and you’ll be able reach them for future reference.
Honey, as you’re aware, my elder sister is fond of classical dance, we’ll not find anyone better than you for this event. This is because you’ve done training in classical dance from Karnataka and this experience would greatly benefit us in upcoming function.
Friend, if you would be able to perform a dance performance on this grand event, I’ll make it up for you to my best. After some deliberation, I’ve decided to gift you a new phone on my sister’s wedding.
Hoping to see you soon!
With love
Keith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'April 2021'.
Suggestion: April 2021
...marriage, which has been fixed for 20th April, 2021. I’m delighted that my elder sister h...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...rted your career as a dancer, I believe its a golden opportunity for you to showcas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88202247191 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50987822432 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707865168539 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1089964702 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5555555556 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23319013207 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983909855203 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545230304793 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126749861726 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511380904794 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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