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Dear Joseph Sir,
I am writing this letter regarding the need for extra lessons for my son, Sahil mistry. He is taking French class from you but he is unable to cope up in the class. He finds it difficult to comprehend the language.
He comes from a Hindi speaking background and is unfamiliar with French language. It is a tiresome experience for him to speak basic words as he cannot achieve the correct accent.
You are teaching French for past two years in this school. Can you tell me your previous experience in teaching French? Also, what is your approach to teach this language to an individual who comes from a different background?
It will be a great help for him if you consider teaching him for extra hours. If it is convenient then you can teach him either twice or thrice a week for two hours. it will boost up his confidence and not will not consider of dropping the opportunity to learn the subject.
I kindly request you to think upon taking classes for Sahil. He thinks highly of you and it will be a great help to him for his future endeavors. Awaiting for positive response.
Thanking you.
Your's faithfully,
Mrs mistry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ficult to comprehend the language. He comes from a Hindi speaking background ...
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Line 17, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...r twice or thrice a week for two hours. it will boost up his confidence and not wi...
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Line 21, column 147, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...t help to him for his future endeavors. Awaiting for positive response. Thanking you. Yo...
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Line 25, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nse. Thanking you. Yours faithfully, Mrs mistry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69902912621 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50386166074 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577669902913 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0645878956 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.5333333333 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7333333333 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214436098135 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701122960966 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517736289477 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112771157894 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469971543185 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.