Some believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have a high level degree. Do you agree or disagree?
t is rightly said that each and every person works as per his or her capacity. Some people argue that payscale should vary from person to person, according to the work done. thus, its a controversial issue to pay equally for the labour work and the work done by a person with higher degrees.
First of all, lets focus on the topic that the salary should be similar for each category of people, irrespective of their degrees. If we talk about local companies where work is limited then I think the pay scale should be almost similar to the work done by labourers. For example a person working in a factory will be paid same wages as the person doing menial jobs in any companies. Also, the effort put by a construction worker who faces lot of hardships to do is job is quite similar to the mental effort put up by manager of a company. A teacher works for 6-7 hours to prepare her lessons, teaches number of students, solves their problems and get minimal wage. On the contrary a manager who sits in an air conditioned office for 8-9 hours get paid more. Their work is different but effort put in is alomst same. Still the salary is different which is unfair to the low-salaried people.
If we look at the other side of the coin, then we can see that the work of an army general is far more complicated than a soldier. Their salaries are different because the general has earned it by going through years of struggle from being a soldier to a general. Therefore the difference in salary is right.
I would thus like to conclude by saying that the wages of persons should be different depending upon the kind of work they do. This helps them to grow and strive for a better salary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, i think, kind of, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4501607717 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37222776373 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572347266881 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7723563961 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19144904219 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590715966303 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481481287203 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105761382164 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486059284437 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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