Some people believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have high-level degrees
Do you agree or disagree?
it is important to consider how work of every individual is significant, to keep up with the demands of the increasing population.There are some people who think that the wages of individuals doing physical work is equal to the persons with higher degrees. I completely disagree with this statement, and in this essay I will support my view with the examples.
When you have a degree, you know what kind of work is done. On the contrary, laborers do manual work. There is no opportunity of growth as they do same kind of job. they are like herd of sheep who will do what the leader says without use of brains. while a learned person will work, to grow in his field. They will think of other ways to do the job and so the salaries should be distinct.
If we look at the example, salary of a soldier and army chief is not same. it is because the work done by a soldier and army chief are distinct. Both work in army but one follows order while other gives the order.
it is undeniably true that the world cannot run with degree holders. So the persons who do physical work are of prime consideration and without them educated people cannot work. I would like to close saying that if you know how to grow then you can earn more money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, while, kind of, you know, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39826839827 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40696533651 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5670995671 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2577032374 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5714285714 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295986248695 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865658566233 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798690885052 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164653211297 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083628220215 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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