Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is positive or negative development?
today there is pervasive tendency to buy the goods whenever you are. this development has positive attitude and provide people easy access to gain products which available for residents from other country.
To begin with, sometimes people have to immigrate to other country. Although moving out is the one of the most important and tough decision people make in life, they do not think about traditional meals or some religions accessories. It is widely known, India, China use plethora of type ingredients to make traditional dishes. However, nowadays we can buy in Indian or chines varieties products in supermarkets. Moreover, some immigrates create their own restaurants and shopping center, where is the most likely presented their traditional market and cuisine. For instance, chines, mexican, russian restaurant where besides food, people can enjoy other traditional entertainment like dances and songs.
Secondly, today technology is developing and thanks to up-to-date equipment's and websites products is available all over the world. there is widely known that in modern life we can get in touch with people who live in abroad and buy some products on websites. For instance, there are most popular online shopping sites eBay, amazon, aliexspress where can find a variety of type products which accessible for all people of the world. Nevertheless, now country has become resemble. they can export or produce myriad of goods which become useful for migration people.
In conclusion, we can countries have been becoming similar over the past years. this tendency is considered benefits who can want to receive some products or service in other country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50957854406 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71498048578 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4500556297 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197754813973 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677634631448 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405675086199 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130485495547 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385120575484 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.