Some company use logging that make papers which has benefits for education. Consequently,it has so many disadvantages.
Firstly, I want to explain why deforestation has benefits. In education, papers are important,books are made from it and so many things which is not exist if we do not cut down the trees. SO many things which we use them in daily time.
However, if deforestation is expand it make array of rainforest such as from flood to drough. Roots is useful for preventing the erosion. Now air pollution get bigger because of myriad problems.This leads to global warning.
On other hands, Industry fell the trees and made building in stead of this. If the trees reduce i think we can not breath due to carbon. Oxygen is producted by trees.
The sum of all idea that i think it is not end but we should try to understand why trees important for us. Therefore, it will be limited.
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Some company use logging that make papers which has benefits for education.
Some companies use logging to make papers, which has benefits for education.
so many things which is not exist if we do not cut down the trees.
so many things which do not exist if we do not cut down trees.
Roots is useful
Roots are useful
Sentence: However, if deforestation is expand it make array of rainforest such as from flood to drough.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and expand
Sentence: Now air pollution get bigger because of myriad problems.This leads to global warning.
Description: The fragment pollution get bigger is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace get with verb, past tense
it is not end but we should try to understand why trees important for us.
it is not ending but we should try to understand why trees are important for us.
Sentence: However, if deforestation is expand it make array of rainforest such as from flood to drough.
Error: drough Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Oxygen is producted by trees.
Error: producted Suggestion: No alternate word
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
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Score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 6.28 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.629 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.131 0.07
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