Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Leadership is a vital role in a community or a group. It is considered as the most respectable position in the society. In some circumstances, it is fair to be an active participant than to lead the team but in other situations, it is vice versa. In my perspective, I assert that both being a leader and a member of a group is equally valuable in certain environments.

On one side of the argument, I state that leadership is the best quality that is highly beneficial to direct people in the right direction. Moreover, I feel that it is an art of coming forward and taking responsibility to favour the people and guide them for the benefit of the group. I would like to mention the example of the first minister of Scotland Mrs. Nicola Sturgeon. When she was the member of Scottish parliament, the Scottish government failed to pass the Scottish Independence referendum, then she took over the leadership of the government as the first minister and now strengthened the independence referendum into a stronger possible one in the near future.

Nevertheless, on other side of the argument, I feel that being an ordinary member of a team could enable to actively contribute to the group. In addition, the individual member could feel lesser pressure and burden, and, hence it enhances them to work effectively and efficiently. Therefore, they could provide game challenging opinions to the group leader, thus the whole group could benefit out of it. For instance, Mr. Sundar Pitchai, CEO of Google Incorporation, initially worked as an ordinary employee and helped Google Inc. to lead the technology among other leading firms. Today that organisation has honoured him by making him to lead Google Inc.

In conclusion, after coxing and boxing of the issue, positions of the member as well as the leader of the group are well balanced in different scenarios. Therefore, in my opinion, whatever the position in which we contribute to the group, it is highly valuable and respectable in a group.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95266272189 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99173727616 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508875739645 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0798200321 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197908287411 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601997772025 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062857333345 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128993278351 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059772249252 0.056905535591 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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