Increasing the price of petrol is best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
There are many traffic problems as well as the pollution issue due to the rise of private transportation. It is commonly believed that increasing the price of gasoline is the most effective way. However, in my opinion, there are several actions that more impactful rather than only to increase the petrol price.
On one hand, adding the price of petrol could help increasing the cost of transportation allocation by using private vehicle. In other words, people will find it is pricey if use their private car to go to work. As a result, they will choose to replace the option of transportation mode into the cheaper one, such as mass transportation. It therefore will contribute to the decrease of traffic jam and pollution problem.
On the other hand, to build the better infrastructure of public transportation would be the better idea to solve the jam problems and environmental issue. For instance, everybody will avoid bumper-to-bumper traffic with choose to commute with train, if only the schedule is reliable and the mode is safety as well as confortable. To explain further, sufficient facilities of public transportation could attract people to decrease the usage of personal car or motorcycle.
Furthermore, having an examplary figure is also significantly effective to embrace people to keep their private car at home and go outside with mass transportation. By this I mean, this figure would be an ambassador of environment-friendly city that could reduce the road density and finally safe the environment by using public transportation. For example, Ridwan Kamil as a Major in Bandung has been successful to attract people in that city to using angkot, a local public transportation mode, by going to work everyday using this kind of vehicle. Consequently, it could raise awareness of society to move on to the public transportation.
In conclusion, even though there are pros and cons in this situation, there are more effective efforts to be done to tackling the traffic jam and emission problems rather than only increase the petrol cost. If government pay attention to the development of public transportation and to get a powerful person to be an example, citizen will left their car at home and the issue of traffic and pollution could be addressed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to increase' or 'increase'.
Suggestion: to increase; increase
..., adding the price of petrol could help increasing the cost of transportation allocation b...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...efore will contribute to the decrease of traffic jam and pollution problem. On...
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Line 7, column 515, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...c transportation mode, by going to work everyday using this kind of vehicle. Consequentl...
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Line 9, column 340, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
...l person to be an example, citizen will left their car at home and the issue of traf...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i mean', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'in other words', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257985257985 0.247107548796 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.144963144963 0.15552993741 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0958230958231 0.0946569551029 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.02457002457 0.0437536398559 56% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117936117936 0.122223957237 96% => OK
Participles: 0.034398034398 0.0403219363162 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.19597654874 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0565110565111 0.0326786765898 173% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0884520884521 0.0861751148067 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.029484029484 0.0214082191602 138% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.002457002457 0.0119246538136 21% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2281.0 1933.38276553 118% => OK
No of words: 372.0 316.052104208 118% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11528150134 6.10592293882 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20519365927 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35752688172 0.37474360046 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266129032258 0.284197041944 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193548387097 0.203843217982 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126344086022 0.137313986986 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19597654874 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481182795699 0.560935902166 86% => OK
Word variations: 50.7938756773 60.7401812628 84% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0911823647 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.25 20.7725350517 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2801803858 49.5273876611 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0618556701 93.4120437189 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3402061856 15.2821509519 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.865979381443 0.594174754866 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.39078156313 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01102204409 80% => OK
Readability: 49.8629032258 49.1922392462 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.83516483516 1.69127372897 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.314855179604 0.332604825255 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10739272538 0.102734651613 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0511203276904 0.0668474354756 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.595933603891 0.534917948617 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0915801801788 0.148666948902 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147952834454 0.13441755203 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483623235376 0.0742828286743 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.434334099445 0.324241079732 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0485190680477 0.0640056729886 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230441893697 0.22793763319 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381692372621 0.0582452615562 66% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41883767535 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.88977955912 170% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.60220440882 38% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.00200400802 100% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.493987976 124% => OK
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Rates: 70.9230769231 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.5 Out of 9