In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
At the present age, overweight and obesity are rising while the health status and fitness are dropping. I strongly believe that these problems caused by sedentary lifestyle in society and there are lack of knowledge on diet pattern. To address those issues, balance diet campaign is highly effective as one of the solutions.
First of all, nowadays, technology are developed to make human’s life is easier. It therefore trigger people to have sedentary lifestyle which is rarely doing physical activities. As a result, the expenditure energy is bigger than the intake, leading to the increase of average weight. Secondly, many people have bad diet pattern which is dominated by carbohydrate. For instance, junk food is commonly consumed in society which is not healthy, notably for heart and blood circulation. Consequently, it will give effect for health status and fitness as well as contribute to obesity.
To tackling these problems, increasing awareness of people on the importance of healthy lifestyle is required as a preventive action, particularly education I school. In other words, altering the lifestyle of citizen is long haul process and it is best started at the younger age. Another idea would be campaign of balance diet to frame the true knowledge through media that correct composition of the meal plate is important. This action is needed to change the previous pattern that is not healthy.
In conclusion, even though there are many factors causing overweight and decline of health and fitness figure in some countries, not only physical education in school but also social campaign on diet could be taken to combat overweight and improving health status
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'triggers', 'trigs'?
Suggestion: triggers; trigs
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'hauled'.
Suggestion: hauled
...tering the lifestyle of citizen is long haul process and it is best started at the y...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'first of all', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.286195286195 0.247107548796 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.161616161616 0.15552993741 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0909090909091 0.0946569551029 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.016835016835 0.0437536398559 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117845117845 0.122223957237 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0572390572391 0.0403219363162 142% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75732703269 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030303030303 0.0326786765898 93% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0707070707071 0.0861751148067 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010101010101 0.0214082191602 47% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016835016835 0.0119246538136 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1685.0 1933.38276553 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 316.052104208 85% => OK
Chars per words: 6.24074074074 6.10592293882 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20519365927 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.446096654275 0.37474360046 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.349442379182 0.284197041944 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.219330855019 0.203843217982 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152416356877 0.137313986986 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75732703269 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.560935902166 106% => OK
Word variations: 63.0033755116 60.7401812628 104% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0911823647 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2142857143 20.7725350517 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4825961672 49.5273876611 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3568904594 93.4120437189 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3074204947 15.2821509519 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.840989399293 0.594174754866 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01102204409 40% => OK
Readability: 54.1585236325 49.1922392462 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.92957746479 1.69127372897 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.466020483853 0.332604825255 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0824057320118 0.102734651613 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0408995414974 0.0668474354756 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.535998529721 0.534917948617 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157108073442 0.148666948902 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172438759354 0.13441755203 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828953472172 0.0742828286743 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.27735594144 0.324241079732 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.112373672593 0.0640056729886 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318550783788 0.22793763319 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367505452004 0.0582452615562 63% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41883767535 29% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.88977955912 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.60220440882 192% => Too many negative topic words.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.00200400802 50% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.493987976 105% => OK
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Rates: 70.9473684211 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.5 Out of 9