Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news one.
Every nation in word has buildings same as history place. In Indonesian, every place have buildings with different detain shape and color. This is interesting for people y abroad to visiting Indonesian place. Many peoples from abroad came to Indonesian with some reasons in Indonesian has many beautiful places for example is Borobudur place in Jogja. We can see, people from abroad came to saw the buildings.
Some people agree about statement, because with knocked down and replaced old buildings, the government can build accompany, store and anything. With build them, some people can look anyplace with new detain and not old buildings. More than all, some people agree because think old buildings not useful for people, just to increase rubbish in Indonesian place. Now is globalization era, every people use modern technology, if government has old buildings there is not useful for some people. We can see in Jakarta capital city of Indonesian, many new buildings arrange. There is increase progress for Jakarta example build accompany which in accompany there is modern technology while old buildings there is vintage technology which rare necessity again.
But, I disagree about statement I mind if government has the old buildings this is useful for in Indonesian and new generation in Indonesian. Firstly, for education, in Indonesian every school gives the student lesson about history old buildings, patriot and anything. The student see patriot of Indonesian who struggle for arrange Indonesian, with that young people can responsible in the future and then follow a good character by patriot. If government knocked down and replaced with new building same as moll, this is not get young people a lesson and anything. Secondly, guarantee for live some people must think if Indonesian has many old buildings this is can increase economic. We know many persons from abroad came to old buildings for look old buildings. This is can produce many, more than all unemployment in Indonesian can reduce, with the old buildings government can create job vacancy for take care the old buildings.
In conclusion, I disagree about the statement because I mind the old buildings is useful for Indonesian, more than all old buildings is history place, we must continue old buildings same as to be character in Indonesian.
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Every nation in word has buildings same as history place
Every nation in the word has buildings like history places
Sentence: We can see, people from abroad came to saw the buildings.
Description: The word saw is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to saw
Sentence: With build them, some people can look anyplace with new detain and not old buildings.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to With and build
Sentence: But, I disagree about statement I mind if government has the old buildings this is useful for in Indonesian and new generation in Indonesian.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to for and in
gives the student lesson about history old buildings,
gives the students lesson about the history of old buildings,
Sentence: The student see patriot of Indonesian who struggle for arrange Indonesian, with that young people can responsible in the future and then follow a good character by patriot.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to can and responsible
Sentence: Secondly, guarantee for live some people must think if Indonesian has many old buildings this is can increase economic.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to for and live
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to increase and economic
Sentence: We know many persons from abroad came to old buildings for look old buildings.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to look and old
Sentence: This is can produce many, more than all unemployment in Indonesian can reduce, with the old buildings government can create job vacancy for take care the old buildings.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a modal auxillary
Suggestion: Refer to is and can
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to for and take
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 11 2
No. of Different Words: 145 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 11 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 375 350
No. of Characters: 1903 1500
No. of Different Words: 145 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.401 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.075 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.621 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 140 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 108 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 62 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.737 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.025 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.579 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.443 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.568 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.251 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5