Most developed countries spend a large proportion of their health budgets on expensive medical technology. This money should be spent instead on health education to keep people well. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Whether or not rich countries should spend a large amount of health budgets on investing in advanced medical technology to be a hotly debated issue. There are those who argue that it is esstential to use money to educate people to be aware of maintainance of their health. To my mind, I do not completely with this viewpoint for several reasonable arguments.
More and more serious diseases have appeared and become a high risk of human beings. To make sure to diagnose exactly the symptoms as well as the causes of the diseases, it is crucial to have advanced technologies such as MRI machine to examine the medical results. Thanks to modern technology, doctors are able to jump to conclusion and have appropriate solutions to deal with serious diseases such as stroke, diabetes and cancers. Moreover, doctors also can perform complex operations to safe patients due to advanced techology.
However, government should concern more about saving up money from state budget for preventing infectious diseases. This also considered as a way of indispensable measure to limit the diseases spreading over the community as well as educate people to be more concious to protect their health. What is more, leaflets need printing and delivering to people to guide how to make balance in their diet, how to have better immune system as well as what kinds of food they should enjoy to have better metabolism. This information is valuable to broaden their mind in keeping their health.
It seems to me that, government should reconcile the need for investment of modern techonology in the medical field with concern for policies of popularisation to prevent the spreading diseases as well as keeping their health. This is regarded as a well-balanced policy in developed countries.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2014-09-07 | nguyenkhaccuong | 67 | view |
- The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.You should write at least 150 words. 65
- While people flood into big cities to seek jobs and happy life there is a tendency for people to move out What problems do big cities have Give reasons for answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 90
- Universities should accept equal number of males and females to study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree?Give your reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 85
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, shool is the place to learn thisDiscuss both these views and give your own opinion 53
- Some people believe that using animals to test the safety of human medicines is cruel and unwarranted whereas others feel it is a medical necessary Discuss both views and give your opinion 86
Whether or not rich countries should spend a large amount of health budgets on investing in advanced medical technology to be a hotly debated issue.
Whether or not rich countries should spend a large amount of health budgets on investing in advanced medical technology is a hotly debated issue.
Sentence: There are those who argue that it is esstential to use money to educate people to be aware of maintainance of their health.
Error: esstential Suggestion: essential
Error: maintainance Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Moreover, doctors also can perform complex operations to safe patients due to advanced techology.
Error: techology Suggestion: technology
Sentence: This also considered as a way of indispensable measure to limit the diseases spreading over the community as well as educate people to be more concious to protect their health.
Error: concious Suggestion: conscious
Sentence: It seems to me that, government should reconcile the need for investment of modern techonology in the medical field with concern for policies of popularisation to prevent the spreading diseases as well as keeping their health.
Error: popularisation Suggestion: popularization
Error: techonology Suggestion: technology
flaws:
a lot of 'as well as'
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 292 350
No. of Characters: 1453 1500
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.134 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.976 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.749 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 114 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.462 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.32 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.335 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.562 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.052 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5