News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in a newspaper. What factors do you think influence their decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
Media comprising electronic and print forms has been part and parcel of everyone's life. Presently, selecting the content by editors to be shown requires a great deal of psychological labor and observation to pull the attentions of people towards news. Here, this essay will account for whether we have been immune to bad news or providing good is worthful along with deciding factors behind news.
Manifold factors can be put down those influence the choice of publishers. First and foremost, the interest of people contributes remarkably to determine what to broadcast. To illustrate, youngster...
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How are ideas sir ?? it was
How are ideas sir ??
it was quite challenging to write
Ideas are great! We pay
Ideas are great! We pay attention to languages more than ideas however.
whether it effects their personal life or not.
whether it affects their personal life or not.
might not appeal to choice of people
might not appeal to the choices of people
Sentence: On the contrary, Bad news catch attention of safety concious people worldwide on account of information to be alert and prevent themselves from mishappening.
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Sentence: Here, this essay will account for whether we have been immune to bad news or providing good is worthful along with deciding factors behind news.
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Sentence: Initially, once a radio chanel decided to broadcast only bad news instead of good, soon they found themselves out of business.
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Sentence: Apart from it, being more self-centered, concious, people have greater tendency towards bad news in order to know whether it effects their personal life or not.
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Sentence: On the contrary, Bad news catch attention of safety concious people worldwide on account of information to be alert and prevent themselves from mishappening.
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Sentence: Last but not least, the number of good happenings is far more less than bad inccidents.
Error: inccidents Suggestion: incidents
Sentence: To recapitulate, news have become need of hour to stay updated. it is advisable to determine what to show to meet reqiurements of people and stay in business.
Error: reqiurements Suggestion: requirements
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 350 350
No. of Characters: 1745 1500
No. of Different Words: 198 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.325 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.986 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.691 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.449 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.346 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.561 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.101 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5