Nowadays plastic money replacements such as credit and debit cards are extremely popular, even more than banknotes and coins. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Include your personal opinion and examples based on your own experience.

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Nowadays plastic money replacements such as credit and debit cards are extremely popular, even more than banknotes and coins.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Include your personal opinion and examples based on your own experience.

In this modern era, people are readily accepting new practices. This is no more evident than people using plastic money instead of traditional notes and coins. Many a times people carry number of debit and credit cards rather than cash. Plastic money has revolutionized the way trade is being conducted. This essay will discuss benefits and drawbacks of using plastic money.

To begin, undoubtedly, unlike cash cards are easy to handle and provide flexibility. They also help in reducing resources which are used in producing notes and cash. In addition to that, unlike cash it is easy to keep track of all credits and debits in the bank statement. For example, many companies provide credit card expense information on email therefore making it easy for consumer to check all the detail online. Popularity of these cards is evident from the fact that growing number of people posses them and use it while shopping online.

On the other hand, there are certain drawbacks for using the cards. Firstly, as these transactions are done over the Internet there is possibility of theft. For instance of user credentials are stolen in a minute hackers can erase all the money from the account. Secondly, plastic money is not acceptable everywhere. Small vendors , kiosks for example do not have the infrastructure to accept the cards. Thirdly, while dealing in cash there is a possibility of corruption as there is not electronic proof for the transaction.

To summarize, although there are some drawbacks, benefits are numerous .In years to come it may be possible that entire trade and commerce will be done by plastic money.

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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 269 350
No. of Characters: 1318 1500
No. of Different Words: 153 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.05 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.9 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.544 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 89 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.824 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.544 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.647 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.298 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.501 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.054 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5

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Task Achievement: 7.0
Lexical Resource: 6.5
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 7.5
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

flaws:
No. of Words: 269 350 //350 words will be ideal
No. of Different Words: 153 200
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.824 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.544 7.5

Need to extend your ideas. for example:
'cards are easy to handle and provide flexibility.'. after that, you need to argue more.

what are those flexibilities?
why they are more flexible?
how people use those flexibilities?
etc...

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