some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school

Primary school is a important phase for our children
Primary school is an important phase for our children

Sentence: Regulation in our country organize that primary school start when our child about six years.
Description: The fragment country organize that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace organize with verb, past tense

Sentence: Our goverment has already emphasized that six years has been ready to received knowledge about science, language lesson or something like that.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and received

Sentence: Time by time kind of knowlegde that teach in the school like primary or secondary school more than more develop like foreign language learning for long time ago will begin learning when we continue or study in scendory school.
Description: The fragment more develop like is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace develop with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular

Sentence: This policy get apreciate and reglection from our society because many people said english foreign language hard for primary school but from research some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Description: The fragment expert believe that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace believe with verb, past tense

Sentence: Pay attention this research, behalf for our education in the future i was agree with the expert because bagin learning foreign language at primary school has outweigh advantages than disadvantages.
Description: The fragment was agree with is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace agree with verb, past participle
Description: A verb 'to have', present tense, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to has and outweigh

Sentence: For examples, reliable whatever something that you always do it earlier you will make it your habitual.
Description: The fragment , reliable whatever is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace reliable with adverb

Sentence: An other consideration when we was in primary school our brain still fresh so give chance our brain easier to absorb what a lesson.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to school and our
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to chance and our

Sentence: Different with us, now we have already lated begin foreign language.
Description: The fragment Different with is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace Different with adverb
Description: A verb, past participle is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to lated and begin

Sentence: This phase will begin the real lerning about everything.
Error: lerning Suggestion: leaning

Sentence: Our goverment has already emphasized that six years has been ready to received knowledge about science, language lesson or something like that.
Error: goverment Suggestion: government

Sentence: Time by time kind of knowlegde that teach in the school like primary or secondary school more than more develop like foreign language learning for long time ago will begin learning when we continue or study in scendory school.
Error: scendory Suggestion: scenery
Error: knowlegde Suggestion: knowledge

Sentence: This policy get apreciate and reglection from our society because many people said english foreign language hard for primary school but from research some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Error: apreciate Suggestion: appreciate
Error: reglection Suggestion: reflection
Error: english Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: Pay attention this research, behalf for our education in the future i was agree with the expert because bagin learning foreign language at primary school has outweigh advantages than disadvantages.
Error: bagin Suggestion: begin

Sentence: Especially for learning language one keyword if you walnt get fluency is practice when they begin to learning about foreign language it means they will make it a habitual.
Error: walnt Suggestion: want

Sentence: Different with us, now we have already lated begin foreign language.
Error: lated Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: It is too difficult to memorise now.
Error: memorise Suggestion: memories

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 12 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 11 2

Read a good grammar book.

better to have 4-5 paragraphs:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
para 5: conclusion

or:

para 1: introduction
para 2: idea one.
para 3: however, idea two
para 4: in my opinion...

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 3.0 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 12 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 11 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 278 350
No. of Characters: 1414 1500
No. of Different Words: 149 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.083 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.086 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.426 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 112 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.385 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.242 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.385 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.403 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.48 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.234 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 2 5