Some say that reading newspapers and watching TV news is a waste of time, because it has no direct connection with people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Media plays a pivotal role,one can keep himself/herself updated by reading newspaper and watching TV news. An individual came to know about the on goings in the society. One can not shun the fact that without knowledge of surroundings,an individual could not survive. Though some people assert that reading newspaper and watching TV news is a waste of time, because it has no direct connection with people’s lives. In my perception, news are integral part of everyone's life and nobody could imagine their life without it.
To begin with,it has been seen that the drastic development of media ove...
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but also the youth show
but also the youths show
It act as a source
It acts as a source
one should grabs the reality
one should grab the reality
Sentence: To recapitulate, I would like to say that News are the part and parcel of ones life and this can not be shunned anyhow.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to ones and life
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