Traffic Jam Elevation
Growing traffic and pollution could be delevated by increasing the fuel price, but that is not only the path to realize or to solve the problems. I totally disagree if this regulation is accelarated.
Growing traffic could be happened by amount of couses such as increasing of vehicle consumption, road expending is less than transportation growth, personal user, unclear regulation from governmen and that sort of things. According to the causes of traffic jam, getting increase time by time without any sollution by recently. We may not decide elevating fuel price is th best way to delevate traffic jam directly. Teh government, as a regulator, should give the attention to the midle-down society. High price of fuel could influence or could be spreaded to other sectors as like foods, allowances, clothes, spare part wich people might be difficult to handle it because they come from midle-down class, get low salary. So, increasing price of petrol is not fit in this term. For me, the best way to decrese traffic jam is to stop importing or producing the cheap vehicles, moreover cars and motor-cycles.
In the other side, incresing price is still not the best way to delevate the traffic jam, moreover pollution. Pollution is not only coming from transportation or even using high technology transportation which have not any gas emission, but also it is comes from industries, smokers and wasteges.
In conclution, high price of petrol could not solve the problems of nation. The government should more consider to make regulation.
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such as increasing of vehicle consumption, road expending is less than transportation growth, personal user, unclear regulation
Description: can you re-write this sentence? they are not parallel
Pollution is not only coming from transportation or even using high technology transportation which have not any gas emission, but also it is comes from industries, smokers and wasteges.
Description: Not only...but also is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?
The government should more consider to make regulation.
The government should consider more to make regulations.
Sentence: Growing traffic and pollution could be delevated by increasing the fuel price, but that is not only the path to realize or to solve the problems.
Error: delevated Suggestion: delegated
Sentence: I totally disagree if this regulation is accelarated.
Error: accelarated Suggestion: accelerated
Sentence: Growing traffic could be happened by amount of couses such as increasing of vehicle consumption, road expending is less than transportation growth, personal user, unclear regulation from governmen and that sort of things.
Error: couses Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: governmen Suggestion: government
Sentence: According to the causes of traffic jam, getting increase time by time without any sollution by recently.
Error: sollution Suggestion: solution
Sentence: We may not decide elevating fuel price is th best way to delevate traffic jam directly.
Error: delevate Suggestion: delegate
Error: th Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: High price of fuel could influence or could be spreaded to other sectors as like foods, allowances, clothes, spare part wich people might be difficult to handle it because they come from midle-down class, get low salary.
Error: wich Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: spreaded Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: For me, the best way to decrese traffic jam is to stop importing or producing the cheap vehicles, moreover cars and motor-cycles.
Error: decrese Suggestion: decrease
Error: motor-cycles Suggestion: motorcycles
Sentence: In the other side, incresing price is still not the best way to delevate the traffic jam, moreover pollution.
Error: incresing Suggestion: increasing
Error: delevate Suggestion: delegate
Sentence: Pollution is not only coming from transportation or even using high technology transportation which have not any gas emission, but also it is comes from industries, smokers and wasteges.
Error: wasteges Suggestion: wastes
Sentence: In conclution, high price of petrol could not solve the problems of nation.
Error: petrol Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: conclution Suggestion: conclusion
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 252 350
No. of Characters: 1252 1500
No. of Different Words: 144 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.984 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.968 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.773 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 88 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.385 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.06 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.615 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.347 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.544 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.072 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5