1.Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not inviduals as inviduals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the environmental problem becoming seriously, many people anticipate that addressing these problems is the responsibility of governments instead of citizens. From my personal perspective, I would firmly refute such a view and concede that both governments and inviduals are responsible for protecting the earth
On the one hand, there are several reasons why the politicians completely have ability to tackle this issue in an effective way.People can not deny that a large number of serious environmental problem including global warming, prolonged droughts and violent storms go far beyond solving ability of inviduals, they require the efforts and the cooperation between the political leaders and the large environmental organization in many parts of the world. It means that they would mobilize the supports of experienced experts who are top of this field. Furthermore, tackling this issue needs to use a huge number of modern technology devices. A typical example of this is that the authorities put more resources into limitting the emissions by using renewable energy from solar. Therefore, they might equip the specialized divices such as solar panel. As a result, merely governments are more likely to have sufficient subsidies and resources to invest in this.
On the other hand, individuals should also take responsibility for the impact they have on the environment. The populace could take public transport rather than drive as the way to reduce carbon dioxide into the air. On a societal level, populace should raise public awareness of using reuseable bag. It is essential to get shoppers into habit of using grocery bags or paper bags. In addition to using reuseable bags, people should recycle more by turning plastic objects into useful one on a regular basis. By reusing and recycling, we can contribute to reduce waste.
In conclusion, I would reaffirm that protecting the earth is of utmost importance as urgent task for both national governments and individuals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35350318471 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93952494959 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595541401274 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 132.21542409 49.4020404114 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.071428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0898791701417 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.023504096751 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369640985519 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577237902179 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401104286714 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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