Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
People's opinion differ as to whether or not university students have the right to opt any subjects they feel a sense of enjoyment. There are some strong arguements against the effective utilization of university subjects after graduation. While there are some reasons why this could be the case, i strongly advocate that learners should be able to study the couse of their choice.
There are various reasons why people believe that universities should only offer subjects that contribute to a particularly useful source of knowledge for university graduates. We can not deny that a numerous number of educational institutions involving in medince, information technology and engineering should be appreciated more highly than branch of learning including art, acting. From my personal perspective, those who are trained in a professional and well- equiped environment are more likely to feel a sense of job security, provide many well- remunerated jobs and have career progression. It means that they should be able to cover their lives and even improve better quality of life. On the societal level, with the force into certain key subject areas, the future researcher can assure to manufacture new inventions for humans. As a result, they would create a breakthrough for the whole human race
Despite these arguments above, I believe that university students should be free to choose their preferred areas of study. First and foremost, people could not precdict which areas of knowledge can be useful for life in the future because nobody knows the evaluation criteria of the employers for enterprises, It may be that employer value creative thinking skills. Therefore, learners should hear themselves and follow their passions, which help them form their opinions and achieve better academic outcomes. If this were the case, perhaps we need more students of art, acting and history than of science or technology.
In conclusion, although it might seem sensible for universities to focus only on the most useful subjects. I personally advocate the educational system in which learners could study whater they like
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
Peoples opinion differ as to whether or not university students have the right to o...
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...s after graduation. While there are some reasons why this could be the case, i st...
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to include'.
Suggestion: to include
...ted more highly than branch of learning including art, acting. From my personal perspecti...
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Suggestion: many wells
...o feel a sense of job security, provide many well- remunerated jobs and have career progr...
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...over their lives and even improve better quality of life. On the societal level,...
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... the societal level, with the force into certain key subject areas, the future re...
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... a breakthrough for the whole human race Despite these arguments above, I believe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32537313433 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7994302956 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591044776119 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1982358716 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.428571429 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34806908249 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108923537842 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584014754243 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20382865442 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369021147516 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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