1. Government pays university tuition for students (which means students do not have to pay). Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
There are many advantages when tuition fees were paid by the government. Firstly, Students do not have to worry about the financial burden. Because of the expensive University tuition, a significant number of students who come from rural areas do not have a chance to go to university. If the government pays university tuition for students, they can easily study University and have a chance to get a better job.
Secondly, Students can totally pay attention to study if the university tuition was paid by the government. Beside tuition fees, students have to worry about many things such as house’s rent and subsistence expenses, so they often find a job to pay for that expenses and do not have time to study. For example, many students work from 8 to 12 hours per day at restaurant or coffee shop.
Apart from many advantages, If tuition fees were paid by the government, it can lead to some disadvantages. Firstly, All the students want to get a better job with a university degree which leads to a lack of manual labor in many industrial zones. For example, Students want to have an office work or be a manager when they choose to study at University rather than be a worker.
Furthermore, The quality of education might be decreased if a huge number of people choose to study university. It quite hard for teachers to control a significant number of students. For example, Students can not get enough knowledge from teachers if they study in a class with 100 other students.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the fact that the government pays university tuition for students will have more advantages overweight disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...her students. In conclusion, I totally agree with the fact that the government pays university tuition ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84213693318 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9288721791 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422177508552 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155515006004 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104832896407 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271230120306 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133251314558 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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