Some people think computers are more important in education. Others believe teachers play a more important role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Computers are getting more important in education nowadays . Firstly , Students can easily get knowledge from a computer , because there is a great number of resources about many fields on the Internet which students can access for free .For example , they can self-study mathematic , liturature or even science .
Secondly , A computer with internet can be a perfect mean for student to active in studying . Because of Computer convenient ,students can study anywhere and anytime they want .For example , In Covid-19 situation , students can stay at home and join online courses instead of going to school.
Athough computer have an important role in education , I think the role of teacher outweighs that of computers .Firstly , Teachers will guide students how to study effectively. Because there is a huge amount of knowledge on the internet,students do not know how to choose a good one to follow .Furthermore, If students were not directed by teacher , they may find the wrong ways to achieve knowledge .
Secondly , Teacher is a person who gives students not only knowledge but motivation and passion. Students can learn many social skills and actual lessons from a good teacher .For example ,A computer can not teach students the way to communicate with others or the way to share things for
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19138755981 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83877676818 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602870813397 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0091339736 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.625 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150607772524 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103256998489 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120216988635 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100235041892 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538359040443 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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