The ease of international travel and the spread of various kind of mass media all over the world have made it more possible than ever for people to know how other people live in other countries. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ?
Nowadays, people are living in an era with a booming international travelling tourism, which has no borders and with a thriving spread of mass media all over the globe. I believe that this trend only has advantages which are overwhelming the drawbacks.
The general view is that people are far more open to find out about new countries and places and that's why this kind of world-wide travelling has so many advantages. Firstly, the main benefit comes from the economic plan, which is very profitable for locals. It is not something new that tourism has become a serious factor in the industry, because, due to this massive flow of visitors or even journalists to new places, the locals can easily make profit from providing travelling services for them, like guides or hosts. Secondly, travelling without borders around the world means flourishing the knowledge about new cultures and people. It is an undeniable truth that going to a place and staying there for a while is a lot more different and mind-blowing than seeing it at the TV or reading about it. By being there is more efficiently to learn about culture, language and traditions.
On the other hand, international tourism can have some detrimental effects on both, environment and people. In detail, when a large number of visitors are in an interest place they can create some serious damages, with or without their will. By making this point I want to highlight that the beauty of the landscape can be ruined and garbage left behind by tourists is a real threat for animals. This spread of mass media and the continuous rising of the international tourism brings with it the need for tourist resorts, which I believe infringes the rights of the locals, who are forced to move somewhere else.
All in all, international travel and spread of mass media can only bring benefits to people if it is controlled. For so many countries the advantages of this trend are staggering.
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...bout culture, language and traditions. On the other hand, international tourism...
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...who are forced to move somewhere else. All in all, international travel and spr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86404833837 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70679016045 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549848942598 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2412683269 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277912730784 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913698509602 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723886936175 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18841936386 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641169610046 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.