1. Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
culture is the mirror of the country. what you do with your rituals is exactly showing the clear picture of the nation. I believe, with tourism we can display the real values to other people of the nation but some people believe that the culture may be destroyed with attraction of the tourist's revenue. this essay will elaborate both the ways of aspects.
To begin with, the first merit is, in most of the developing nations, people come across the country and with the help of values, we can get the attractions of the people from other parts of the world which is directly generate the curiosity to see and feel the different values of the nation. For instance, some states have their speciality in their cuisines which can attract to people to come and eat it. Moreover, along with exploration, revenue will also be raised to the government. Additionally, public authority can use this revenue for public welfare also which can develop the progress of the nation.
The downside of the aspect is that foreigner can also make the thing worst if they really don't get the real what they desires. The values may be destroyed by giving the wrong information to other one which is definitely ruined our culture values in other area. government can take the responsibility to settle the things in good way between people and its culture.
To close, I must say that we should welcome to people to enjoy our culture values and generate the revenues from them and government should use that money to public welfare.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78707224335 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42632032449 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520912547529 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6880252913 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.916666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238705806935 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903555817319 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632779032808 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148909412036 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662844468264 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.