1. Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?
Good health is undeniably a cornerstone of a fulfilling life, and many argue that it should be safeguarded from profit-driven interests. While there might be some valid concerns about the morality of this business model, I firmly believe that the advantages are far more significant.
Critics of private healthcare often express ethical concerns related to the profit-driven nature of these institutions. They may argue that profit motives in private healthcare can sometimes give rise to overmedicalization and unnecessary procedures. In a competitive market, there may be incentives to recommend additional tests or treatments, potentially exposing patients to risks and financial burdens. These concerns, however, are often limited to the very most extreme situations, and not applicable to the vast majority of private healthcare facilities which still successfully maintain high ethical standards, prioritizing patient welfare over profit margins, and delivering quality care without unnecessary intervention.
In my opinion, private healthcare can be more beneficial in terms of a higher quality of services and individualized experiences. Private institutions often compete for patients, driving them to invest in state-of-the-art facilities, employ skilled professionals, and adopt cutting-edge treatments, resulting in quicker access to care, reduced waiting times, and a broader range of treatment options. Additionally, private healthcare can offer a level of personalized attention and comfort that may be lacking in public facilities. With a lower patient-to-staff ratio, medical practitioners can devote more time to individual cases, enabling tailored treatment plans for patient well-being.
In conclusion, although there might be some instances where profit motives may lead to overmedicalization, these cases represent the exception rather than the rule. The potential for higher quality services and personalized care make private healthcare a valuable complement to public services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12056737589 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46696815905 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631205673759 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6758234848 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.833333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210759394712 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762124707496 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449033751706 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131023932217 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381083457447 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.51 12.4159519038 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.94 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.