Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies.
Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With the thriving of modern society, today, citizens are able to get access to a wide range of healthcare services in order to take care of themselves holistically. In fact, more and more private medical services have been established to meet the requirements. Yet, there are some people who claim that well-being is a basic amenity for humans and should not be expanded for business purposes. From my standpoint, I contend that the benefits of medical services outweigh the drawbacks.
One major ground behind the reason why several people oppose private healthcare services doing more harm than good for residents is the primary purpose of these services lying to generate profits. Indeed, most businesses operate with the aim of optimizing profits and might ignore their responsibilities to the whole community, particularly in the healthcare area. Consequently, this may lead to misunderstanding about the role as well as benefits that these services provide for people. In addition, running a private business requires abundant expenditure both fixed and variable costs that it has to cover entire expenses by itself without being sponsored by the government. Therefore, it has to increase healthcare prices to ensure enough budget to operate, indirectly creating financial obstacles for low-income families to get an approach. The United States, for instance, has the most exorbitant private healthcare system in the world, being a barrier for many families to leverage services.
Nevertheless, I firmly believe that the advantages of private healthcare are more pronounced. The first advantage is that private healthcare systems play a significant role in alleviating the workload of public hospitals, particularly in the peak demand. Today, almost all private hospitals are equipped with cutting-edge portable devices meeting the high standards like public hospitals, thereby ensuring the quality for patients as well as sharing the burden for the authority. For example, thanks to private healthcare centers, numerous patients who contracted COVID-19 were treated thoroughly until entirely recovered despite the peak of the Covid-19 pandemic. Furthermore, the harsh competition among private healthcare providers might play a key role in enhancing the quality of public healthcare.
In conclusion, although private healthcare might have its downsides, notably high costs, I still believe that its merits, including reducing pressure on state-owned healthcare institutions and driving improvements in their services, carry more weight in the overall assessment of its impact.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71059431525 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01231927211 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59173126615 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2079659392 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.125 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1875 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192003780268 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654932767286 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049232365179 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115108289988 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702272091977 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.