1. Some people think that no one should be allowed to work after 65. Others say that people should be allowed to work for as long as they want to. Give your own opinion. Do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that workers should be retired after 65, while others tend believe towards the viewpoint that age should not be considered as a problem to stop working until they wish to do so. In my opinion, I would like to support the first
On one hand, in the modern economic world, all the businesses are on a run with vast competition. They always target on the younger, energetic workforce who always look over the boundaries and who are keen with overloaded works. Therefore, they rather like to say ‘Good bye’ to the old employees in spite of the experience they have. Further, when concern about the health and work environment, many employers who do businesses in hard working pace, such as timber, garbage, metal, coal etc., generally get rid of workers before they come to their retirement age, due to bearing a heavy risk and health on these workers welfare. For example, old workers in timber and iron industries are in high possibility of affect with long term cough and lung cancer. In mining site, there are many hazards which prevent slow moving workers to cooperate with hard works.
On the other hand, it is correct to a certain extent, that labours who work on casual basis or poor economical status, are fallen into an abyss, when they lose their jobs, due to lesser job market and non-retirement plan. Asian developing countries such as sri Lanka, India, Bangladesh etc., still in a lower stage in reset retired people by introducing proper retirement plan or insurance.
To sum up, all the governments should take the advantage of keeping the maximum age work restriction, to reduce the un-employment rate, allowing more youngers to engage with workforce, and giving a hand to retired persons to rest without economical issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...n industries are in high possibility of affect with long term cough and lung cancer. In min...
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Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...abours who work on casual basis or poor economical status, are fallen into an abyss, when ...
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Line 6, column 239, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...hand to retired persons to rest without economical issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, still, therefore, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92976588629 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59492549531 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638795986622 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.080270618 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.4 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221970037263 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741710394407 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754970834024 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136329813925 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797927068181 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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