Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
It is undoubtedly the world is on race with a vast competition to sustain with socio- economic changes. Youngers are in a deep depression with numerous incapability to overcome with this tragedy. This essay will discuss deeply on this topic.
First, in modern word both parents are required to work in order to live with advance facilities and to provide a higher education to their younger ones. A recent survey shows that this situation leads the dependents live without a proper care from parents such as love, discussion, share the feeling etc., due to less time to enjoy as a family. This may influence the teenagers to follow various attractions such as drug addictions, sexual interactions. According to a recent psychological journal, demonstrate that youngers who are alone are trend to be sexual abused in their early childhood and may involve with illegal activities later in adulthood due to long term stress. Moreover, this could worsen when the kids are push to work when the financial status are deeply poor. They may work with adults, with heavy or unsuitable works which might leave their smooth child desires to a rough condition. Although they could feed the family with money, they may not build up themselves with personal and social values such as, behaviour, interacting with people, love another etc. but may live in world with money valued. In addition, some countries are still in back ward with introducing the education to the schoolers. They still practice some old educating techniques and methods which brings the students more stress with the thought of ‘learn by hard’. This is apparent in Asian counties such as India, Sri Lanka, Bangladesh which force the students to study the only the theories with no practical observations, in the time table, even though this will help the students to pass the exams, but eventually deliver a person with no sense of personality.
In nutshell, the youth is the main strength in any country, and both families and authorities to protect them from the beginning and lead with a good hand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the only the'. Did you mean 'only the'?
Suggestion: only the
...adesh which force the students to study the only the theories with no practical observations...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a person with no sense of personality. In nutshell, the youth is the main stren...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he beginning and lead with a good hand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, moreover, so, still, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01744186047 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62699999784 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598837209302 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.05368723 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.066666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.086248101123 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382788686744 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397662317353 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0529302041294 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374689724526 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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