12. In some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? what are the effects on society and family life?
In modern society, the delaying of childbirth in some countries is becoming very common. In this essay, we will take a closer look at the causes of this development and its effect on both society and family sides.
We will take the reasons for postponing parenthoods into consideration. First of all, the driving force behind this trend is changing employment patter. A modern woman who is well-educated, confident, and independent, with those personalities, tends to follow higher educations and pursue career achievement. They tend to devote their lives to work and train themselves intensively. They are willing to marriage in the 30s or early 40s after achieved their personal goals. Secondly, young people in modern society, who worship individual freedom, spend more time exploring the world, satisfy their curiosity, and do not wish to be held back by family responsibilities at a young age, thus not having a family is a preferable choice.
Have children late in life has many drawbacks not only in society but family side. Firstly, with regard to families, the ages couple face many risks when they have a child, especially the women. In the age 30s or early 40s, a woman might suffer severe health risks from the prenatal and postnatal periods. Furthermore, the impact of having a child late will cause a significant gap between the two generations. It is hard for a parent to understand and communicate with their offsprings. That leads to constant quarrel and misunderstanding. On the society side, the low birth rate, which the delaying of childbirth caused, put pressure on the labor workforce. The low fertility rate will mean an aging population with a lack of young employees. A workforce with a high proportion of aged people is unproductivity that can lead to the detrimental growth of the economy in specific and thriving nations in general. In addition, the graying society put a lot of burden on the government's shoulder in the healthcare system, the welfare program.
In conclusion, we have known the reasons which caused the delaying of childbirth tendency, and what we have mentioned about its impact on society and families. The government and each individual should create a balance in the marriage age and prevent the negative effect it caused to the whole fabric of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in general, first of all, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08684210526 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94056898973 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1528980672 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.65 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222237593605 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550055937132 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718444398742 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127926647626 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380147263703 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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