Nowadays, in some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?
Currently, in some nations, men and women tend to give birth to their children in their later adulthood. This essay will indicate some explanations to this phenomenon with its impact on community and family life.
From my perspective, the roots of this development can be attributed to two main reasons. Initially, some people yearn for being in higher positions of their careers instead of contributing to their own family. Additionally, having children earlier in life may act as a deterrent to their promotion as they might have to devote a great deal of time to taking care of their children after birth. Another key explanation is financial ability. In order to meet offsprings’ essential needs such as food, milk, clothes or education fees, spouses must work hard to earn money.
This phenomenon has constructive effects on both society and family life. To begin with, the country may experience tangible progress in economic development as there is a dedicated workforce who devote their whole youth to their occupation. This can be easily derived from developed nations where people delay having their children born until a later period of life and the GDP is far higher than that of developing countries. This phenomenon also represents a stronger family focus and better parenting. Older parents possess better financial ability to provide their children with great educational resources and spend more time with their children without the stress of earning money.
In conclusion, my verdict is that many youths these days do not prioritize having babies early because they are more into careers and saving money for raising their children late in life, such a tendency makes great construction to society in general and each family in particular.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25704225352 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71479329935 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616197183099 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2395625692 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.846153846 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267585932489 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100712634853 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783035328364 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177136493765 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376003383157 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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