In some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life.
What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?
There are many countries where having children later in life has emerged as a growing trend. Such development can be an outgrowth of professional and budgetary considerations and they can pose threats to family unity and child health.
Such working parents often focus on the development of their career and ascend professional hierarchy. Obviously, parental care will cost a couple an inordinate amount of time especially in terms of teaching or feeding and attending babies when they are sick, and such demanding tasks will be huge obstacles in parents’ career path. Furthermore, financial stability also deserves serious consideration because raising a child would require a large proportion of a family’s finances. Moreover, due to today’s erratic economic climate, it is advisable not to have a child when parents are not well-prepared or otherwise they could confront with financial distress, adversely affecting the childrearing.
The repercussions of late pregnancy can be immense because of high rates of birth defects as well as age gap. The discrepancies in attitudes and perspectives of old parents and a young adult child can cause unresolved disagreements, such lifestyles and this could be the occasion of family separation, likely resulting in family breakdown. More significantly, another problem is the increased chance of health complications with infants. Many studies have indicated that unborn babies can be prone to health issues such as growth retardation, and this will have direct negative impacts on society as these children will be a burden rather than contribute to the growth.
in conclusion, although being pregnant when a couple are fully ready can offer certain benefits, the disadvantages regarding family happiness and the well-being of infants will be likely more serious.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54838709677 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10263450544 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620071684588 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2168175772 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.727272727 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112785771133 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483885474191 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536511769163 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764481439496 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553671432218 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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